Comments on: How to Write Better Sales Copy (Use This One Tip)

By: Jack

Jack — Wed, 14 Mar 2018 09:41:46 +0000

This is awesome. Love this post on sales copy. We are starting a new company and I use this guide to developing my skill as a copy writer. I have never learnt copy writing in school although I have a masters degree from a university. So thanks Derek. Appreciate it. Keep sharing!!!

By: Peggy

Peggy — Tue, 12 Dec 2017 20:48:09 +0000

I loved watching your video. It perked up my interest so I could not stop watch this great video and learn all this awesome information and inspiration. I provide the impossible; I actually teach people how to talk with a local Canadian Accent (it works for standard American too). This is not a band aide; my clients are often mistaken for local people. The ‘so that ‘ statements are brilliant! Derek I have been on your mailing list for a long time.
Maybe this video is the video that converts me t! Can I use your video people?

By: Aksel

Aksel — Fri, 09 Oct 2015 14:52:38 +0000

Hmm my tagline still is :

Riches That Stick: Resources you can tap on for a lifetime.

Now that I think about it, that seems a too abstract. I kinda took the advice from another post you have that says to.

Riches That Stick: I crash test online courses so you don’t have to.

By: Michele

Michele — Mon, 31 Aug 2015 21:22:15 +0000

This is cool. What I do is always add some variation of ‘so that…’, for example you get an hour with me SO THAT you can ask any questions, etc. etc. Valuable advice, thanks Derek. 🙂

By: Cathy Mayhue

Cathy Mayhue — Mon, 03 Aug 2015 15:48:32 +0000

You are right knowing your products and services inside out is one thing and expressing them on paper or webpage effectively is a completely different ballgame. When it comes to sales copy half the battle is won just by a cursory glance at first few sentences, if a visitor gets what is looking for there, then only they will bother to read further and even go to the extent of doing business with you.

By: Eden

Eden — Sat, 11 Jul 2015 06:39:22 +0000

Helpful tips and videos Derek, and much needed! Thanks man

By: Max

Max — Mon, 06 Jul 2015 19:24:10 +0000

Thanks James!

By: James Hughes

James Hughes — Mon, 06 Jul 2015 13:06:55 +0000

Love this post on sales copy. Great content all round.

Thanks for sharing.

James

By: James Hughes

James Hughes — Mon, 06 Jul 2015 13:04:46 +0000

Max, great site. Great photo’s!

By: James

James — Fri, 03 Jul 2015 11:46:14 +0000

On my freebie landing page (temporarily offline as I retweak) it “One 5 minute tip to build your willpower muscle daily” But, you’re right, it doesn’t say why that is important.

A rough draft of a better improvement: “One 5 minute daily exercise to build your willpower muscle so you can get things done more effortlessly” Again – a rough draft but you pointed me in the right direction. Thanks!